too adjective-y... exciting lunch, eclectic dishes, talented staff, etc... seems very, local/generic, not streamlined. Saying "some see Huntsville's best little secret for yourself" implies that the place isn't "happening" and that no one knows about it - something huntsvegans don't like...
some googled phrases I liked:
"take a mini vacation to Spain." "smaller portions so you can enjoy all the flavors of..." "exquisite food and impeccable service" I liked this the best: "With a tapas-based menu, you can try a number of items before settling on a fave. Order several and share!"
A tag line I made up: "You're invited to (eat at) the best table in town, the Chef's Table!"
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Date: 2007-04-13 03:35 am (UTC)some googled phrases I liked:
"take a mini vacation to Spain."
"smaller portions so you can enjoy all the flavors of..."
"exquisite food and impeccable service"
I liked this the best: "With a tapas-based menu, you can try a number of items before settling on a fave. Order several and share!"
A tag line I made up: "You're invited to (eat at) the best table in town, the Chef's Table!"